Heterochromia
Blue and green
At odds, mismatched
Together but blind
Offbeat
But with the beat
Flickering sunlight
Untold stories
Withering silken
Love in soft fur
Surreptiously
Slithering
In sunshine
Till I see
The eyes
In the ice
The golden glare
Of the glaring disguise
Teetering
and toppled
Tethered
And teased
Shuffled
Wrung out
Tweezed
And freed
Psychedelic sanity
In sunshine shade
Suede skin
Silver stares
Fantastic swagger
Swaggering flair
Flaring love
Naked and bare
Throbbing longing
For
A united dream
All undreamed
A satiny blur
Far away
Away for long in a
Stormy night.
That cold, distant
Glaring disguise.
I didn't get the poem. Care to explain?
ReplyDeleteSorry for sounding dumb but poems were never my strong point.
wow...nice, I like the orchestration of words...my favorite part would be "Psychedelic sanity...In sunshine shade"
ReplyDeletegreat read!
very poetic with vivid images
ReplyDelete@ Raghav
ReplyDeleteI think the meaning of the poem is different for everyone.. and I guess it's not even remotely same for two people, unlike how we're taught at school :(
But to put it in a few words, for me it's about the grandness of love, being different and then finally and.. sadly, giving up.
@ Dagny Taggart
Thank you.. I hadn't tried writing with the effect this poem is written in, ever. And I'm glad it turned out all right. Didn't think I could work with orchestrated words and wondered if they would end up displaying the actual feelings..
@ Nalini Hebbar
Thank you for the insight and again.. for subscribing :)
None of my poems have been called "poetic" before and I know they weren't. Thanks for the comment.. I'm glad my poems are finally growing up :D
Alive - breathing words.. Would love to read more of you.. scrolling through the posts.. bang ! bloody time.. keep rollin'
ReplyDeleteWow, thanks :)
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